First Performance Feedback

First Performance Feedback

What could be improved?

• Greater use of levels in the movement sequence.
• MORE CONTEXT- Why is the dead man drowning? Is the water taking him away or is it a peacefull drowning? Struggle or surrender?
• More speaking from the drowning man.
•  More exaggeration and synchronised movement.
• Perhaps address the audience at some points.
• How can we transition from the downing scene without leaving the stage?

What was good?

• Movement made it clear that we were suppoosed to represent water.
• Clear use of voice with distinct child-like qualities.